You have a very good seed of a beginning. Now, you need to flesh this out. Fill in the background, go on with the story. Show how your character grows and deals with this trauma and pregnancy. I don't know where you get your book covers but they are very good. Your writing grabs emotions and portrays them well. Outside of the usual editing that is needed, you do well. Robynn
I Never Thought it Would Happen to meno one ever does...
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