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It's a short story I wrote for this end of the world contest.

end of the world
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Mia Tchoukour

There is so much here that can extend this shot story into a longer piece. I would love to read a longer version of this. This is something that I think would do well in the market. Just sayin'.

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I agree with the other comments; this is a well-written story and you can make this into a full length novel. This is a good interpretation of the end of the world contest.

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This is well-written and different from the other contest entry. You can make a good novel out of this short story. I like your last sentence as the ending. Thumbs up!

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Thanks a lot for your kind words.

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Its so refreshing to read something so different to the (End ) stories that are entered

You most certainly have my vote
I have saved this to favorites

good luck

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Thank you for your thoughts and kind words.

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Very tight. Very readable. The crucible is small, and in this instance it is perfect. A different take on the theme of the end of the world. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and as it is well-written and meets the criteria for the contest, I happily vote.

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Thanks for your kind words, brother.

Kind Regards,
Keith G.

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