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The Trigger

A Story of Morals Von:
The Trigger
When a young woman feels like she's losing her moral compass, a priest is there to help her find her way back to Him.

Stichwörter: 
confession, redemption, trigger, spiritual
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joeparente

well written /had me for a while/ please try one a little longer next time /great tease!! Joe

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treasasam

I liked your style and you are sure to go a long way.felt a suspense and an urgency to read.Thank you very much,I really liked plot as well the sequential surprise.very good.

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gracecountry62

I loved the inner structure of your writing the paragraphs very discreet, very balanced it did not make you feel as if you were not ever going to make it to the last line before you could catch your breath.
The plot was superb, The point was brought up front with shorter paragraphs.
Writing is very up and I am very impressed with the entire structure of book . it kept the reader curious.

Great job my friend

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justxpeachy86

Writing is one of my passions in life, and I strive to do the best I can. Unfortunately I do not feel as though I will win the Battle of the Words, so I will soon be posting an entry for the Rain Stories competition. If you would like, I will let you know when I have it posted.

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justxpeachy86

Thank you all, writing is one of my favorite things to do, and it's always nice to know that people enjoy it.

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rdlarson

Especially touching and realistic, this is a drama that caught my heart.

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BookRix.com

Thank you for participating in our "Battle of Words III" contest and good luck! ;-)

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quicksilver

I like your style very much...the more I read the more I become unsure of my own abilities.

I agree with Cleveland..you should have shot him...the knife was reason enough.

Good work.

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justxpeachy86

I had thought about her shooting and realized that if she had, the story would have been dragged out, and she wouldn't have been able to confess to a priest. She would've been confessing to cops, and there would have been no redemption in the story, because she didn't know about... mehr anzeigen

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justxpeachy86

She did pull the trigger, when he started running toward her. She heard a loud bang and the shattering of glass because she missed him.

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