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My Life As Lily

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My Life As Lily
Lily and her friends preform in a talent show. But at the end they get a huge surprise.Now they are living large as famous singers where everything is perfect. or is it?

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just a detail you might want to fix, even if someone has a boy and a girl and they looked identical it's still called ferturnal (or however you spell it) otherwise this is good. you might want to come in and add little details like for instance: instead of saying someone has blonde hair you can say, 'she spoke as she ran her fingers through her long curly blonde hair.' you gave three details of what her hair looks like in... mehr anzeigen

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