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Horse Love is True

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Horse Love is True
Ther is a girl name Katie she lives is on a farm she is the only one who can get arond a horse she i atash she dose not whant to go back horse love is true

horse love is true
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Okay. This was okay. But you can't tell who is saying what and what their actions are. You need to be more descriptive and you need to explain who says what. If you need an example look at someone else's books.


"Hey," Timothy said while he caught up with me.

"Oh, hey, Timothy," I replied.

Does that make sense??


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