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Winter Nights

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User: Kalai
Winter Nights

Winter is a season that let the seeds sleep for a while and come back with full energy in the spring. Winter nights can stir the love feelings in front of a fire place or in the chilly lawns bloomed with flowers of winter season. I can feel the rich gift of nature in winter season only. So these poems are.


Poems here express the innocent love and dreams of a teenager with her ardent lover who loves her more than anything in the world and helps her to create a world brimming with love.


Stichwörter: 
winter, poems, night
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JustinSix

They are good, but have mistakes that force me to pause, here were some I noticed:
First Poem
The smell of the cigars reminds me OF those secrets (you missed of)
light the flames of the candles. (you wrote lit, which is the wrong tense)

Second Poem
Will it be like to you also? Beliefs made to exchange it - Yet, what disbeliefs crosses our boundaries The boundaries of Love hasn't been yet found (There are a lot of mistakes in... mehr anzeigen

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Kalai

Thanks. Let me have a look at them again. Those were written during my teens.

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storyteller4

love your poems. especially Unfurling Winter flowers- reminds me of today with snow coming down and cover the daffodiles- the last of winter is near here in Iowa.

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marieta

''Sing to me those songs of Love
and unveil my heart's love for you''

It is like a winter sonata .The book is spectacular.Once you open it you
cannot put it down. Thank you for sharing.

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dennisbressack

My favorite words are words of love. Some grammar and spelling errors do not take away from the main theme of expressing love through poetry.

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tariq.summeiyya

I enjoyed your collection of poems! You have a firm grasp and a mastery of the utilization of words and emotions that paint a wonderful painting of the theme of your work. Your poetry has a central theme and I can see the passage of time between the first and the last poem.

Well done and thank you for sharing,

God bless,

Tyrone

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Kalai

Thanks for your wonderful words. I enjoy readership than winning an award.

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petra michelle

There's something about poetry that resonates deeply no matter what the style!

Deserves my vote! Petra :))

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donnamyoung

Very nicely done. I wonder what frame of mind you were in? Good job. God Bless and good luck.

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