Review - I love the flavor of India that you slip into this poem. "Tender fingers crushing tender betel leaves" gives me a feel and presence of your customs. You have a way of expressing the yearning of love in all of your writing. This poem is one of your best works yet. Great job, Kalai. Robynn
You have the right idea but it was a bit choppy/jp
This is a poem that makes you sigh and re-read it again. Well done and good luck.
It is a beautiful poem about kissing.Juicy lips always express the emotion of love.It is one of the way to surrender your lover.
It is really beautifull written. Well expressed emotions.
The secret is in the formatting! And apparently it's a very well kept secret, too! I've had to pull out my HTML coding book on occasion to be able to do a few things! But I'm sure as BookRix grows with true publishing, so too will it's editing abilities!
Avery. Good luck to ya!
That was a terrific poem. Voting starts soon. I hope you do really well.