The Locked and The Lost

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The Locked and The Lost

17 year old Ava has been stuck indoors all her life. She's desperate to go into the outside, and enjoy the sunset soaking into her skin, but there's one problem. She would die within a few hours. Even after three centuries, the fumes and toxins of the outdoors are still deadly. With Choosing Day coming up, Ava's dreams of going outdoors seem more and more ridiculous; until she finds a book. The Lost Country is no ordinary book. It has many secrets, locked away just like Ava, and the only life she's ever known.

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James Gerard

Very good story. Captured the mood of "what once was" compared to "what is now rather well.

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Thanks, if you could give me any pointers on how to improve it, that would be great.

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