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Deception

Halloween - a night for fun, treats, and tricks, only once in a while, a trick can be more than it seems. Once in a while, the one tricked ...well...


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Gelöschter User

This is good. Not much scary but the twist and turns are amazing. Tbh I'd die if something like that will happen to me lol.XD

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judycolella

Lol, yeah, this was a lot more light-hearted. It was part of a contest that challenged us to write something in the style of the "Goosebumps" series.

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Gelöschter User

After all, let's delete little doubts, shall we?

In my country Halloween goes in the light, so far take it like not dark, but and not and night somewhere in the middle,... Yup in the middle!

As second, it was kind of weird story, going in the unknown and uknown and as much you deeper go as more details for something else come... what's happening with the monster... who was he???!?
Why unlock? Not Lock?
After all I don't see If I... mehr anzeigen

Gelöschter User

So, Duron welcome to the discussion share opinion about the book, we all are glad to hear it, aren't we?

Duron Crejaro

Ehh, Judy already knows I love her writing! :)

judycolella

Aw, thanks, Duron. 'D

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judycolella

Thank you for that! Your encouraging words brightened my day considerably. When my kids were younger, they read the Goosebumps books, and sometimes I'd read them, too, to make sure the stories weren't going to freak them out too badly. It's been years now since I last read one, so I was hoping my attempt would successfully imitate at least the essence of Stine's work. Your kind comment tells me my memory didn't fail me too... mehr anzeigen

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DreamSculptr

Enjoyed your story and the twists and turns you design into every page. Most of all I liked your style. And you embodied the spirit of the challenge by keeping the story to kiddos and keeping the action flowing. Thanks, kept me reading to the end. C...

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judycolella

Thank you for saving this to your favorites! Wow! I am honored, my friend, yes I am!

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judycolella

Thank you for your extremely kind words! What a wonderful comment - I can't tell you how much that means. Sometimes (like all writers, I think), after reading the works of so many talented contributors on this website, I wonder if my own efforts are even worth making, but then I get something like this, and I think, "Yay! I really am doing something worth neglecting the dishes for!" Of course, the dishes do get done... mehr anzeigen

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yezall

Which translates to enjoyable reading. You not only have the gift of forming a well thought out sentence but you also have the gift of story telling. Those two things combined make just about anything you produce a pleasure to read. You could easily become one of my favorite authors. I love how you use the "twist" in a lot of your stories. Somehow you write it so it isn't predictable. Your sense of humor is usually present in... mehr anzeigen

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judycolella

Wow, Chris - thank you very, very much! I read your comment right after I woke up and it made me smile. What a great way to start my day!

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writingxpl4net

im just scraping the surface of this website and if this is what im up against its gonna be hard, but theres just one question, what else was in the cake?

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judycolella

Mom really had it in for those people...actually, I kinda left it up to the imagination of the reader. More fun that way, and many more possibilities! And thank you for your very encouraging feedback, by the way - I really appreciate that, and look forward to reading your work. :D

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