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A PLACE BY THE SEA

ghosts from the past Von:
User: stormwind
A PLACE BY THE SEA
a short ghost story

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ghost story
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mirandabm

So is there more to come(as you indicate in the last line)? Hope so! I enjoyed this and want to find out more about the reason for the haunting - the story behind it. Good writing!

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rmdelta

Stormwind,

an enjoyable read all the way through. Perhaps it's just me, but I don't understand why you capitalize He and She each time you wrote the words. I'm not proficient enough to know if there is a reason for this, but it was enough to cause a slight, but, harmless distraction.

Great story. I did pick up on another thing I think you should correct, but it's only a suggestion:

When the character is thinking to himself, or... mehr anzeigen

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librarian

Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".

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