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The Face in The Mirror

A short story Von:
The Face in The Mirror
Not much to say, except be careful of strangers in mirrors, as although they may seem gentle, sometimes... they find that you are the one they want.

UNDERGOING EDITING.

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ChibiRi23

I like it.
There was an early belief that mirrors could trap a soul, therefore mirrors were covered at night and when a person died.

~Edan <3

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stormstar1

I will lengthen it soon. Hehe. Happy?

A bit creepy... Wait until the sequel as it is even creepier. Lol

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Gelöschter User

I is kind of creepy to go through the mirror and not be able to go home, but at least the girls not lonely any more.

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guidedgal

I think that you can add short story writer to your list of gifts. I just wish they weren't so short lol

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lazarus67

A story like this can have SO many different meanings. I like how you left it up to us to figure out our own spin on it. This also can very easily have a continuation.
Well done Pixie!

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stormstar1

I fixed the error you pointed out Val. I am glad you liked it though.

Judy... oh, trust me, now that I discovered I have a fan club, I will be making A LOT more short stories... don't want to disappoint my fans. lol.

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gooduklady

Lovely short story, Jazz. Very moving and intriguing. One suggestion for you. On the second line, you say "they look like someone I know. ..." but of course it is only ONE person looking at you. So change "they" to "she" where appropriate, and it will flow much better.

Good job. I likedit.

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stormstar1

there are often times when I look in the mirror and I could swear it is someone else looking out at me. Thanks for commenting. :D

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sereni

I liked it. I think it's easy sometimes to look in the mirror and wonder who that is looking back.

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