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Bond

An Unlikely Savior Von:
Bond
Confined to a single room by a debilitating germ phobia, Jenny Rado watches life pass her by. When her mother brings home a dog, the fear escalates, and Jenny's fears threaten to end her life once and for all.

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Dogs, phobias
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jamiebishop

Hey guys, thanks to everybody who's responded/voted/read so far! I agree with the comments relating to development, in characters and otherwise. I had this idea in my head for a while and once I decided to submit the story to the contest, I got a little overexcited and pushed it. I kept thinking that I needed to keep it short so people would actually read it, but I knew as soon as I re-read it that it would come back to bite... mehr anzeigen

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joeparente

Hi Jamie. My main opinion of your story was that you took SO long to get to the point but the point never happened. The transition of the main character was all of a sudden and out of the blue. I was expecting that the dog, Bond, needed some defined heroism that would be responsible for the change. Your idea was good and some re-writing would help tie it together. /joeparente
A great Sci-fi Murder Mystery is waiting for you to... mehr anzeigen

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joeparente

I would love to read your book but the printing is too small. If you change the size please invite me to read it again./joeparente

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