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the car kids 1st series

this is a good book Von:
the car  kids 1st series
well let me tell you how it begans.

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a nice read,as said you need to tidy it up a bit. There is nothing major, look forward to more.

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You have a good start for an interesting story set in an unusual setting. Refinement in your sentence structure and grammar will make this story shine. Robynn

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I like the book, but there were a few errors in the format. A few times, after periods, there weren't spaces before you starteed the next word. Also, you need to make a new paraggraph and put it in quotations when someone begins to speak. I hope this helps.
I definatley will read the next chapter when it comes. :)

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