Nice imaginative tale with lots of color and descriptions that children will love...and of course (since we are older and HAVE to do this) - a moral at the end. Ha Ha. I really enjoyed it and sent you a private message indicating a couple of typos you may have overlooked which, when fixed, will make your story perfect. Good job Jack.
Judgement and WisdomA children's Story
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