Pawstales Chronicles

Princess Beatrix and Jade Meets Their Half Sister (Book 2) Von:
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Pawstales Chronicles

While Princess Beatrix and Jade were heading back to the castle, a flock of crows began to attack and run back to the forest for cover. In the meantime, Tika appears on a large dog as a horse, and clad in armor while fighting off the crows..... 



Dieses Buch ist Teil der Reihe "Pawstales Chronicles"
Alle Bücher dieser Reihe:
Pawstales Chronicles
Forest (Book 1)
1,99 US$
Pawstales Chronicles
Princess Beatrix and Jade Meets Their Half Sister (Book 2)
Kostenlos
Pawstales Chronicles
Spirit (Book 3)
Kostenlos
Pawstales Chronicles
Tika's New Beginning (Book 4)
Kostenlos
Pawstales Chronicles
Saving Teddy (book 5)
Kostenlos
Stichwörter: 
forest, cats, feline, rescued, adventure
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ladyknight26

I really like your book. There are a few things you need to work on such as sentence structure. Instead of using and all the time you could use other conjunctions or commas. Sometimes over using "And" makes the flow of sentences sound confusing. Also on page 6 I think "It didn't appear that way" sounds better than "ways." This book has great potential. I will read some more later.

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indie23

I am glad that you have enjoyed my two books to this collection, and yes, there are three more books to this collection, but they still need some more editing. I will post up one book at a time once they have been edited.

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Demonata-Freak

Is there a book 3????
It was deffiantly nice short stories, them being cut into 2 short books mean they dont drag on and bore the reader :)
Like i said before, really cute...oh and a cat ridin a dog! FUNNY :D

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