This is brilliant. Definitely, wants to make me leave the field and rush to my father's house just 5 minutes away. My biggest regret. Thank you for the motivation.
Heather, I have loved everything that you have written. Kinda cool having a muse to look up to.
All my best!
It seems we all have regrets. You have a unique way of telling how they seep into our thoughts to haunt us.
The last thing I want to think about when I am on my death bed, is my regrets. If I did that, I would have to live forever, just to get through all of them.
Very well written.
Good luck on the contest.