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Life After You Sleep

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Life After You Sleep

A 17 year old girl named Lyla lies in a coma after a tragic car accident. As she struggles to awaken she hears the voices of loved ones and goes back through her memories. But the one thing she doesn't realize is that after you sleep life is never the same.


Stichwörter: 
coma, romance, bestfriends, tragedy
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leslieplaid

So I'm back. If any of my previous readers see this, please know that there have been a few changes. I have deleted part of the story you have read. I have divided the rest into a couple of chapters and a prologue as well improved on the last part. Lyla will still fall for Rhys and I have more twist and turns to add to the story. Please give it another read and leave your comments below. Thanks.

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leslieplaid

So I am thinking about changing Lyla's first name and Devin's last name.

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leslieplaid

Thank you for your constructive criticism and confidence boosting comments I hope to be posting part 2 soon.

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manjitpreetam

It definitely needs more work, especially toward the end, but the story and the voice are amazing. Without a doubt you have the gift.

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lazarus67

Beautiful story about true love; one that is entertwined with real friendship. Those last.

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sylvia.kilmart

I LOVED THE STORY WISH IT WAS LONGER.

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leslieplaid

The book is longer I just haven't been able to install the rest of part 1 or finish part 2. Thanks to all the scandal I wasn't sure I had any fans left. Not many people apreciate the arts anymore.

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leslieplaid

It's a pen name nothing more. Those who write understand that. You are clearly not a writer and do not respect the arts. Delete your account you have no reason to be on in the first place. Other than to cause trouble.

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leslieplaid

It's a work in progress and unfinished. I am taking all of your advice in stride and incorpraring some in it as I go along.

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joeparente

Good story/ Wish it were longer. Possibly needed a little more on character development.
This was an original idea./joeparente

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leslieplaid

Thank you so much. I never thought my hobby would become something more. If anyone else has a comment please feel free. I can't wait to hear what you have to say.

Sincerely,
Alice

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