I read a part of this bok , enough to give me a flavour.Nothing wrong with the content but there is a definite need to keep the tension and interest of the reader all the time. Standards are standards but by breaking a rule and showing you've broken one makes the writer more accepted by the reader. Look through and think how to re-edit what you wrote. Good luck.
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