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Deep In Winter Thought

A Book Of Recollections Von:
User: franny124
Deep In Winter Thought
A book of short poems dealing with winter and the holidays.Some are funny and some are serious.







































































Stichwörter: 
winter, poems
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franny124

I am still working on meter,as you can tell some of these poems are not even in terms of syllables.Thanks for reading and I have entered a number of my poems in contests.As Old As The Sea actually came in third place in the May 2010 voicenet contest.

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Rgabel

Review - Christmas Tree Memories, Thirty Years Ago, The First Christmas Eve, were my favorites. I think the Christmas Tree my very favorite, because it captured my thoughts exactly when decorating every year.

I love your 'voice.' You really are quite good at creating scenes and emotions in such short, compact lines. I hope you have tried to put some of these poems in writing contests. I think you would do well. Great job. Robynn

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joeprice

very good. touching. i liked it. good writing. thank you, joe price

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franny124

I am glad you liked it Joe! :-)

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patricia.books.works

Franny,
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us. I really liked the poem, "That First Christmas Eve."

Please consider reading and voting for my book, My Reflections, which is also a poetry book.

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franny124

Thanks for your comments Carmen,

I am sorry about your losses as well.I am going to edit parts of my book,and maybe come up with another poem in the process.Good Luck to you also!

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franny124

Thanks for the read and advice Dennis.I am going to re-edit over the weekend.I am taking yours and Robbotinas'advice.I welcome any detailed criticism privately.Good Luck to you.I love what I have read of your work,but wasn't able to download anything.I am impressed with all of the contest participants'so far!

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dennisbressack

Deeply moving poetry about loss of loved ones, a part of life that we share. Like Robottina's comment, I would like to point out that, for me, the spelling and grammar errors took away from the power of the words and the quality of the writing. You still have the opportunity to re-edit. In addition to the suggestions already made, I am happy to offer my specific thoughts as well.

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Alikzandria James

I think you are at your best when you write about something you are passionate about and through your personal experiences. I like the descriptive qualities in most of your poems. Use of the senses draws the reader in and they are able to feel as if they are experiencing the event you are writing about. My sincere condolences to you and your family on the death of your brother. I do not know when it happend, but time is... mehr anzeigen

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franny124

Hi Alikzandria,

I am sorry about your sister as well.Writing has certainly helped with the grieving process,and thankfully I am in a better place now.Thank you for your kind words.I wish you much success here and in your writing career in general.

Franny

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