Suchen
  • Alle Suchergebnisse
  • Bücher
  • User
  • Gruppen
  • FAQs

The Argument

Von:
The Argument
A literary sketch about a couple at odds.

Stichwörter: 
Love, Marriage, Men, Women
Beiträge und Kommentare
Wichtiger Beitrag
Gelöschter User

B ︀е ︀s ︀t ︀❤️ ︀P ︀о ︀r ︀n ︀★ ︀S ︀t ︀а ︀r ︀s, ︀open ︀link ︀↪ WWW.INTIMCONTACT.COM?_ebook-erin-house-the-argument

Wichtiger Beitrag
sylvia.kilmart

WAS A GOOD STORY.

1 Kommentar
Gelöschter User

B ︀е ︀s ︀t ︀❤️ ︀P ︀о ︀r ︀n ︀★ ︀S ︀t ︀а ︀r ︀s, ︀open ︀link ︀↪ WWW.INTIMCONTACT.COM?girlinglasses89_1279070928.8645401001

Wichtiger Beitrag
girlinglasses89

Hi Rebekah, thanks for the feed back :) This piece stands alone. I wrote it one day when I felt the need to write something different, something I've never experienced. This was the result. I don't really know who the protagonist is because, as in life, they both have their issues. She's a control freak and pushed him away, he cheated on her....

As far as the ending, I really like it because I feel it signifies what's... mehr anzeigen

Wichtiger Beitrag
rebekahjennings

Hi Girlinglasses,

Just giving your work a read now. I liked this story. I think your writing is tight. I think your dialogue works well. Is this a stand alone piece or is it part of something bigger? If its a stand alone I might ask some structural questions like: It seems you're using the affair with the twenty-four year old as a 'reveal' and reveals don't necessarily make a story. Yes, they do in mysteries but not in every... mehr anzeigen

Wichtiger Beitrag
lazarus67

Sad...but so tue in so many relationships....nicely written

1 Kommentar
Dieser Kommentar wurde gelöscht.
Wichtiger Beitrag
etelizabeth

Yes, I was pulled in, and yes, you left me wanting to know more. A good job! Elizabeth

1 Kommentar
girlinglasses89

Thank you so much for reading and for the feedback!

Wichtiger Beitrag
gooduklady

You told this well. The reader is drawn into the story, as though she were standing between the two. Well done.

Um eine optimale Funktionsweise zu gewährleisten, verwendet unsere Website Cookies. Durch die Nutzung der Website stimmst Du der Verwendung von Cookies zu. Mehr Infos
OK
Top of page
Kein Miniaturbild Entfernen Bitte wähle einen Grund aus Bitte gib die Stelle im Buch an. de de_DE