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The Broken Chain

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The Broken Chain
After re-uniting with her son, Elaine must make either reconciliation for the missing years, or a confession that will affect their future.

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sylvia.kilmart

was a great story but sad at the end. i really enjoyed it. thank you, sylvia kilmartin

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gracecountry62

Enjoyed story, but i felt like i was caught in a box. Now please do not get me wrong this is a very interesting story. great plot but not enough for the readers though this is a short story, take a leap of faith and add to your work.
Remember to indent paragraphs. But hey I was a young pup at once in my writing when i first started my first book. They would have stuck it in the Ripley's show case of insane books.
hang in... mehr anzeigen

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jetski

good story, but was page nine the end? Leaves ubruptly. Otherwise, well writen.

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rdlarson

The honesty of the words ring true even though it is fiction. This story has a core of reality that is painful and is yet beautiful.

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craftylady

This is a fast-paced emotional family drama that tugs at your heart. Yes, it is a sad story but then confession & reconciliation often does have this element. I like how the author has an economy of words in this story & yet we feel the emotional impact. Good luck with this contest, Ed.

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cleveland

I enjoyed the drama and he family inter relationships. Overall there is a sadness about the story. Time is short but when Cancer is a reason then the Devil drives and ever moment counts.
Good luck with the contest.

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