You are very talented and the story is interesting. It is in a style that is yours individually and culturally. Some of it might be puzzling to an English reader who has no international experience and that would limit the sale-ability of such writing. The quandary I see in this work is do you make the English more proper and inadvertently reduce it's authentic nature. I like it as is and wish you good luck in sharing.
Rain is me <3A rainy story of a Pluviophile
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