i rly liked it :), not only does it rhyme, but it connects with the reader so well, thx ♥♥
It's so beautifull. It feels like i didnt read a poem but a book. The feeling reading it feels so nice. Like i see the person you describe right in front of me.
I love poetry
nice one :)
It's a wonderful poem, for your first I would say you have done well.
Wow! I really wish i could have a cup of that coffee! Very nice!
good.....A cup of hot coffee
nice really nice loved it :)
Good. Keep writing.
Thank you :)