I'm so sorry, Dennis. I read your book early yesterday, took notes, and something must have distracted me, because I neither gave you my comments, nor voted. And I really trully loved your book.
I noted several poems that I particularly liked, but the very last one: The Journey Begins with the First Step Within" Is a winner. It really brings the book together. You did a good job.
I truly enjoyed traversing the country with you through your poetry. You have captured the essence of many of the places I too have trodden. Being a Florida girl, I can relate to your piece on Sanibel quite well. If I weren't such an adventurer at heart, I just as well might be stretched underneath a beach umbrella for the balance of my days too.
Nice work ~ good luck with your manuscript.
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story writing contest "Travel Stories".
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if you don't shorten somewhere, since
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