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A Past Killing

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A Past Killing
A young girl must kill some one twice one in the present and once in the past to save her family and her love for the future. She must use an untested machine.

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sereni

A Past Killing is on the book jacket but A Death In The Past is inside on the title page. This was confusing.

I opened your book and was delighted. I could envision the characters in front of me, and wanted to read more. The problem I see is it was to short. While I know a lot of books are done with chapters this has a tendency to put me off. I admit to being impatient, I feel some of the shorter books tease, and when I get... mehr anzeigen

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scouts

I rated it that because I am not sure if its going to get graphic or not. also I have added a few passages just now. If you have read them thanks. I might change the rating.

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bookzilla

i'm also a fan of steampunk. and i'm wondering why this book is rated 18+? is it going to get extremely violent or erotic? :)

update me when there's more to read please

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scouts

Thanks. Mostly grammar I believe. But that is what drafts are for. Will be adding more today.

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RebeckDawn

I love steampunk, and you have a good start to your story.

There are a few small mistakes, but for now, I'm just hoping you will update soon.

Let me know when you add more!

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