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Power Play

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Power Play

Lonely torment was Katrina's best friend. A mother who hated her. A father that disappeared when she was little. And a school full of people who enjoyed nothing more than making her already hard life miserable. Being different wasn't always great. Sure it could be a measure of pride, but for Katrina it was something to be wary of. Caution was the better part of valor afterall. But then a new guy moves to town. Someone who doesn't understand the hierchy and tested Katrina's boundaries. With him others come, eliminating her lonliness, just in time for her to have to force it upon herself. A mysterious enemy hell bent on forcing her to bend to his will. In an effort to save the few people that ever cared for her she isolates herself. Pushing them away was the hardest thing she had ever had to do. Yet, they make it near impossible, insisting on putting themselves in harms way just for the sake of being close to her. Somehow she manages to pull everyone together. To make a stand and liberate her race from the centuries of hiding that had plagued them. She simply prays that everyone comes out of it alive.


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Rebekah Wave

I've added your book to my favorites as I've enjoyed reading the reading sample. When you have time, I'd really like you to read the Reading Sample available of my new book Deep Breath, Release, Embrace and Go. Let me know what you think. If not thanks for reading :)

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judycolella

So far, I've only had time to read the first chapter, but found it engaging, well-paced, and the basic writing is solid, The only errors I see are punctuation misuse, one or two spelling errors, and run-on sentences. There are a few tense glitches as well, but overall it's nicely written. A quick observation - it's GI Joe (the abbreviation for General Issue, a military term), not "JI Joe."

I like the way your characters are... mehr anzeigen

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kkat616

Thank you :). I took another look at chapter one, trying to find the errors I missed. I think I fixed at least some of them, though I'm sure I missed most of the punctuation misuses. That is by far my weakest link. I did my best on the tense glitches though. To be honest I have... mehr anzeigen

judycolella

I'm with you on that, lol. I need people's input to help me all the time. When you're so close to a story and its characters that you know them like you do real people, it's almost impossible to spot your own errors. I have at least ten others read through my books before even... mehr anzeigen

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nicole

Mindf#ck. Im in shock. This is amazing! I just ...wow. making a second one? Its perfect with that being the end or it could lead to a sequel. Either way its flawless!!!! How long did it take to write this? Just curious

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kkat616

Lol, thank you. I'm not sure if I'm going to write a sequel or not. It depends on how well this one does. It took me roughly two months to write the first draft. Then I let it sit for about a year before I finally revised it, and it ended up looking very little like the original... mehr anzeigen

nicole

Thats awesome. Im trying to write something. And i have a really good plot in my mind. Theres no holes in the story. Its fool proof. But the thing thats not that great is my writing quality. I have an expansive vocabulary when i need it for english essays but i guess not when im... mehr anzeigen

kkat616

Don't stress so much about it. Quality in writing comes with practice. Seriously, you should have seen the first copy of my first book. It was so juvenile that by the time I revisited it, I was wondering what the hell I was thinking. You kind of learn as you go. I didn't start... mehr anzeigen

nicole

Okay. Yea i'll send the plot when i can. My phone doesnt like me very much right now lol

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Gelöschter User

Iv'e read alot of books but this one is probably the best one here on Bookrix!

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kkat616

Thank you so much! :)

Gelöschter User

No problem.

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gemma

OH MY GOD I LOVED IT SO SO MUCH. CAN YOU PLEAS LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU UPDATE IT.IT WAS LIKE THE BEST BOOK I HAVE EVER READ N I MEAN IVE READ ALOT OFF BOOKS BUT THIS ONE WAS JUST WONDERFUL. N THANKYOU!!!!!!!!! ;)

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kkat616

lol Well this book is finished, but I still need to edit it. But as soon as I finish editing it I'm starting the second one. I'll be absolutely certain to let you know when I do both of those. I'm really glad you liked it so much. :)

gemma

that would be so great i really do love it n thankyou i cant wait!!!! :)

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Lucifer

I liked this, a lot. Your writing style is very good. But theres not enough Damien between the middle and end.

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kkat616

Okay, I'll keep that in mind when I edit. Thanks for letting me know. :)

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Gelöschter User

i loved this book so unusual but awesome!
Anisa xx

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whitewolfhowlingaroo

I agrre perfectly with swan979 here. It's and amazing book and I hope the Author continues to write more like it. Maybe it can be a series...
whitewolfhowlingaroo

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