i like the fact boys still have the nerve to write about feelings. it's just not us girls who really think about the world with poetry. but the thing that really got me from ur poetry was that i know how you feel even in that space of words i understand ur feelings. it's the same kind of feeling i have.
i have to be honest it is way better than my work it's AMAZING well done! :)
This for me was a lovely sad poem. It touched so heavily on some of the feelings that we all share from time to time. Its in the bubble of our despair that inspiration can grow. Remember not to lose the inspiration that inspires outside that bubble.