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The E-Cobantal Hit

End of the Earth Von:
User: cleveland
The E-Cobantal Hit
Earth is dead, or is it a new start for life?

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Drama, science fiction, thriller, culture, life
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virgo5937

short and sweet

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cleveland

It was meant to be short because the longer works on screen often don't get read. Thank you for reading the story.
Best
Cleveland

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cruggero

It's a good story.

Carmen

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cleveland

Hi Carmen

It is all in the longer story 'Remains' a Digital Short on Scamwords.com but thanks for the encouragement.

I've a poem published on line in Soldier. You might like to take a look as it is a popular magazine with the British Armed Forces.
To access the poems pages, visit ... mehr anzeigen

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cleveland

Hi Carmen
Thanks for the star and for reading my story.
England: the choice of country. In the days of Roman Britain the land had previously been visited by Egyptians who brought their magic and culture.So the setting was already ripe for the prayers of the witch to take hold. And her prayers were answered.
The Earth was 'scraped clean of everything because after the meteor impact all living beings died, all vegetable matter... mehr anzeigen

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cruggero

Great idea, Cleveland! We read all kinds of stories about the destruction of the earth and making a new start in stark naked universes, and here you give us a fresh start.

I have the same question as someone else on this page: why England? Did the rest of the world die? That wasn't very clear and needs clarification. My only other comment is that the subject matter deserves a little more room to grow.

Great idea. Keep at it.

Carmen :-)

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lazarus67

Cleveland.
Usually after I've read a story, it doesn't take me long to write a comment. However with this one...I sat for a good 5-8 minutes to see what kind of reply I would jot down.
First...there were many questions...Who was this Warior? (I found out only through your long explanation, that he was cloned by aliens). Why a samurai? How come they were united to save (only) England? And the introduction of St. Georges and God... mehr anzeigen

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cleveland

It is a good review, whatever way I look at it. Many thanks.
The questions.
The Roman soldier was in there...picked up by aliens and taken away. The only DNA about as everybody had been killed when the meteor from E-Cobantal struck. Only an esoteric being might respond...to a plea... mehr anzeigen

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