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Why does she scream, when i must stay silent?

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Why does she scream, when i must stay silent?
Please comment on what you think! This is my first time trying poetry so sorry if its not that well written. Oh and it's a free verse just to let you know :)

Hope you like it...

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Gelöschter User

I'm impressed. May I ask, what's it about? I personally, think it's about a girl who has abused by the guy but the guy felt guilty.

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Forever.Works.

Thank you! I will tell you it is about abuse, but I love the aspect of poetry that is up for interpretation, so I don't know if I want to tell you what I meant it to be about...

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nerdy_unicorn

I don't know how you did it, but that was a great poem. It was easy to understand for people like me, but it still was... sophisticated? Unique? The bottom line is I liked it very much so. Keeping writing poems. :)

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Forever.Works.

Thank you times a million! How could I stop writing poems with people like you who write such lovely compliments.(:

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faze1315

Wowzer. Honestly that was really freaking good. :D I don't get sad easily, but the poem tugged the heart strings. Speechless. Great job, can't wait to read your other books.

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Forever.Works.

Thank you for such amazingly kind words!

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Gelöschter User

Proud to be favorite #30. Haha. I enjoyed reading your intriguing poetry and I love the cover. Nice work and I think you should continue writing poetry. The only thing for me is that every couple of lines I think you should turn it into a stanza. The writing is fine if you leave it the way it is now but sometimes as a reader it can get distracting and confusing with all those lines bunched together.

But that's just my opinion.

~Jillian

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Forever.Works.

Thanks for reading and I will definitely take you suggestion into consideration. I'm so glad you like it!

Gelöschter User

Your welcome (:

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aliceheart

I know excautally ( really bad speller but im working on it.) what you mean and felt. I also had written a peom and my english teacher entered it into a contest. Don't know the results yet BUT reading your poem makes me want to put my poem on bookrix.

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Forever.Works.

Thank you. And you should put it on bookrix! I'd love to read it.

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