Proud to be favorite #30. Haha. I enjoyed reading your intriguing poetry and I love the cover. Nice work and I think you should continue writing poetry. The only thing for me is that every couple of lines I think you should turn it into a stanza. The writing is fine if you leave it the way it is now but sometimes as a reader it can get distracting and confusing with all those lines bunched together.
But that's just my opinion.
I know excautally ( really bad speller but im working on it.) what you mean and felt. I also had written a peom and my english teacher entered it into a contest. Don't know the results yet BUT reading your poem makes me want to put my poem on bookrix.