Conjuring Dragons

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Conjuring Dragons

I never thought things could get any worse than they already were. It seemed as though life was starting to get good, we had both found our soulmates. Scales, tail, claws and all. Real life Dragons. Can you believe it?
Even so, I really thought that this time we could be free. We saw a way out, but suddenly it all got worse. Things got worse faster than they had been getting better.
It's true when they say you can never run from your mistakes without them catching up to you. When you resurrect someone, they just don’t seem to know how to stay dead anymore. Just because you believe it’s behind you doesn’t mean it can’t become a part of your present again. It was supposed to be a peaceful new start, we were finally going to have a family of our own. We were going to be happy, we were going to get loved. Everything looked almost perfect. Things aren’t always what they seem though, and that’s okay I guess, because we’re not as weak as we look.

This book is roughly over 46,000 words.

Book one in the Darling Dragons Trilogy.


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Gelöschter User

Me think you should have let the readers give you some pointers before you published this. Example:

... whether or not the other child heard her - This sentence needs a period instead of a comma at the end.

After a question/exclamation mark the period is dropped.

"Ladies," Cue loud sigh - Cue needs to be small letter since you have a comma. I would also have placed it after voices, at the end of the dialogue instead of the... mehr anzeigen

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Katherine

So even though the book was started on here..... We never got the full story, we now have to buy it on iTunes to finish it???

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Gelöschter User

Sometimes I think the writer has abandoned us.

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Gelöschter User

i agree

Katherine

so true!

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Gelöschter User

Not bad, but pleas keep writing it would be sad to see the book go to waste.

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cleo

Wow!! what an amazing book :D !!!! I enjoyed it very much!! please continue writing!!!

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