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James Linniad and the Golden City

The James Linniad Series Von:
James Linniad and the Golden City
This book is about five kids who learn that they are all apart of something bigger than themselves. It takes place in current day Surrey, England, in a medieval castle. Discovering the secret of the castle means unlocking the door to a whole new world.


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robbedbygreed

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Excellent story!

However, there are two things that put me off(but mind you, this is my personal opinion):

#1- You introduce all the main characters at once - and very quickly - , giving me very little time to develop my own perception of each one. I kind of get the idea of the main brother(James?), but the rest are a blur. From experience, I know it's really hard for a reader to rebound after they've overwhelmed... mehr anzeigen

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SilenceDogood

Thank you so much! I wasn't really expecting this at all. You brought up some really good points, all the things that I had trouble with you talked about, and kind of coaxed me through. I do plan a revision, because this isn't the final draft, as every writer ever will tell you.... mehr anzeigen

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