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I Am 9/11

Part One: Morning In New York Von:
I Am 9/11
Join the serious of I Am 9/11 telling of a girl named Brooklyn Sullivan who throw out the serious go throw 9/11 and is in one of the buildings that were blown down by two planes. Read more to find out what happens.

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robbedbygreed

Now this story is a good catch. The story line itself is interesting and well thought out. You've got a good idea of how to write a catchy story.

However, you have multiple errors including incorrect punctuation and spelling. This can be very distracting to the reader and turn them away. Yikes! That's the last thing anyone wants.

Also, you have no paragraph definement. Again, this can turn the reader away as it's confusing and... mehr anzeigen

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