Another Storm

Will it be my last? Von:
Another Storm
For the Disaster Relief Charity Campaign.

Bethany and Josh were just sitting at school, like they would any other Tuesday, when they heard the sirens.

That same deafening screech that was bound to end in death.

Will this be their last storm?

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Another Storm You have written a strong story, and shown the struggle Beth and Josh had to go through to make it out alive. It was an enjoyable read.

I have a few things for you to look at.
I am not a fighter but I will fight for what I love. This is on the front of the book yet as the story opens I see Another Storm. I am confused, what is the title?

Page 7 The first sentence seems a little awkward to me , see how this... mehr anzeigen

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