You're 13 and wrote this story????
Wow! Good job, Brooke! You have already come so close to mastering the short story. I loved how you wove the narrative in there where Tiffany relived moments long gone. Very effective and not easy to do.
I wish the contest would have allowed at least 10 more words, lol, so that you could have told us what a "perfectly normal body" actually meant!
Very nice, frightening little story, indeed!