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Location - Kodak Theatre

Oscar Night Von:
Location - Kodak Theatre
Hollywood at its best !

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mirandabm

Loved this little piece. An amusing and unexpected take on the great ceremony!

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ambrose

I tend to like short stories more than their longer brethren. A short forces the writer to balance what he wants to say against what there's room for, to be vivid yet concise. The end result is usually something I can only describe as literary candy--it never fills you up but it certainly tastes good going down the hatch.

That said, the first sentence didn't seem to be punctuated right. I would have used a colon after "I've... mehr anzeigen

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briandoswell

Thanks Ambrose, I'll try to punctuate correctly in future. The hummer was merely a point of tinsletown fashion. Last year it was a style thing,;:- this year its not the done thing. How flakey is that? Glad you enjoyed it. You might like to try some of the other shorts in my... mehr anzeigen

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dancepix

Enjoyable read! Don't hesitate to say that the ending kept me wanting to read more than there was to read!

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sreela

Thank you for a well told story. Short, slick, beautiful ending, and very self assured.

I am new to Bookrix, and if I find many more like this, will have to write and thank Miranda for introducing me to it !

Sreela

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gooduklady

I appreciated your comments on my submission so was anxious to read yours. Beautifully written and very professional in that it flowed, was amusing, grammatically correct and entertaining. I think you have an excellent chance with this piece and I hope to read more of your work. I respect your opinions and would definitely enjoy receiving feedback on my ongoing memoirs, FEAST, FAMINE, FULFILLMENT. Good luck and thanks for a great read. Valerie

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ategic.ny28

Yes, I enjoyed the moment in the life of a stand-in at the Academy Awards.

Would love more of the story, too!

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autoincognito

Hi Brian,

A very well-written submission! You did an excellent job at letting the reader see through the eyes of a presenter. I would have liked to read more, only because it was such an enjoyable and effortless read, but at the same time I think you ended perfectly.

Good luck,
Incognito

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petra michelle

was so enjoyable! I so love your writing style and your ability to share events leading up to the Academies so realistically! It is wonderful, Brian!

Good luck in the contest, Brian! Petra :))

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