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When a monster comes stalking, where do you run? Von:
Jimmy and his little sister will need more than pair of shutters to keep out THIS monster...

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Wichtiger Beitrag

Great story...sorry I missed this earlier. Thanks to Avery, I got the pleasure of reading it now.

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thank you, friend.

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Gelöschter User

Whew! I thought the worst as to who the monster was, but I did not see the identity until the very end. Great job of disguising the culprit.

Wichtiger Beitrag

Oh My Goddness. That was Awesome! Such a twist at the end! My blood is still racing.

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J.C. Laird

I loved the dramatic buildup and the shrouding of what exactly was transpiring in the story.

And the ending was a super twist, I can't imagine anyone saw that one coming; that finale wasn't even on my radar.

Nicely done!

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Gelöschter User

.. didn't have a clue that it would end like it did. Good ending, good twist to the story.

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Backwood writer

you very carefully kept this one as a monster and it was a monster tornado .
good job .

Wichtiger Beitrag

Yet another great entry in the contest. I totally expected a different ending. Great job throwing us off!

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Gelöschter User

Perfect building of tension to the satisfying conclusion. Good job.

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L. Avery Brown

I felt the tension building and building. I loved the way you wrapped this story around a horrid 'creature' that wasn't at all what it seemed.

Now when I look at the cover of the book it makes TOTAL sense. (I thought, oh well, another standard 'scary bad guy' story but NO!)

Great job.


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