I liked these pieces as I could tell they were deep and expressed how you feel. Poems don't necessary have to follow rules as you showed. I was impressed but the only slightly negative is the title. You may not care about rhyme and yes rhyming isn't always important but some people enjoy or use rhyme effectively. It's personal choice. Maybe your title was too strong. Still liked your pieces though.
What I See In Everything..My Poems
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