Your story was written with many American mistakes. You, being a foreign author, are excused for this type of venue. Several occurances of leaving out the words 'is,a,s's, and r' on pages: 8,9,14,15,20 and others, stood out as errors. There is a program that can correct these mistakes called "White Smoke.com./joeparente
Very touching story! Emotions, values and principles of the main character are captured very well.I liked the line from the story - "Marriages are made in Heaven. You meet your life partner according to Karma made in your previous life."
An entertaining piece!