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Genesis: Garuda

The Awakening Von:
Genesis: Garuda
A unique young boy goes through a tragedy to unlock a power. He has many obstacles to overcome and becomes a legend who saved everyone. There seems to be a link between him and a mythical creature that could probably save himself and his brother.

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That was a great start and the story flows on, and continues. I can see you have done lots of research on Hindu mythology. You definanately put effort into it. Keep up the good work.
~Jasmine Redolence~

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This is quite a story! I assume its based on Hindu mythology, but since I'm unfamiliar with that, I'm not really sure. Anyway, the story follows a logical and well-thought-out progression of events, making it exciting and fun to read. The language issues are minimal, and can be fixed with some editing help from someone who is a native English-speaker. I'm actually in awe of how well you write, and really hope you continue... mehr anzeigen

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The Garuda

I continued a stroke with my paint brush. This was the finishing touch to my painting. I stood back and admired my painting. It was a painting of downtown. There were many buildings of different sizes lined up shoulder to shoulder. Light emitting from the windows of the buildings brightening the otherwise dark sky. Many people inhabited this painting. After all, downtown was not simply a place for one type of... mehr anzeigen

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Not a bad start, parents murdered, brother become an assian {I think XD} and left alone with a creepy God.
A word of advice, spereate spech with a paragraph...e.g
"It is the only way," he said.

"Theres always another way," I replied.

Understand???anyways, not bad :)

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