Too bad you don't have an attractive cover for the book and you did have a lot of errors but all it needs is a good edit. One caution is the inclusion of an underage child in the action. That will never be accented in any media you might encounter. All participants must be at least 18 and the book should be rated Adults Only... that's 18+ Just a pointer. Lots of luck.
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