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Avalon, Princess of Earth

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Avalon, Princess of Earth
Avalon is the princess of earth and has to deal with a conference with her sister Imika, Princess of Fire, Asina, Princess of Water and Venus,Princess of Air. What could go wrong?


Dieses Buch ist Teil der Reihe "The New Age Princesses"
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spirit.of.the.stars.

I always love stories about special people who can wield the elements. I actually am working on one like that now as well as having two others in mind to write. Your story is good, and I like it. I do however, have one suggestion and that is to break up the large block of text into manageable paragraphs especially the dialogue. It was not hard to read though but still is a recommendation. You have a well-paced story so far,... mehr anzeigen

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