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Ice Cream Man(prequel to Untamed)

the beginning of a legend Von:
Ice Cream Man(prequel to Untamed)
the beginning of the legend known as the Ice Cream Man, real name Felix Orlando and his come to power from a young boy making a decision to a grown man making those same choices


Dieses Buch ist Teil der Reihe "Untamed prequels"
Alle Bücher dieser Reihe:
Tamed: Wisdom&Dog(prequel to UNTAMED)
the meeting of two hoods
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Ice Cream Man(prequel to Untamed)
the beginning of a legend
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Stichwörter: 
drama, street, urban, ficion
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tj.gonzales

Definitely not what I thought it was gonna be. I thought it was gonna be about an Ice Cream Man not a murder. Loved it. You tell a great story. Let me know when you have added more as i want to know what happens next.....

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Ashon Thadon

no [problem..i definitely will let you know when i update..thank you for the compliment and the feedback

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felixthecat

Whoa! Your opening sentence is dynamite! I'll continue reading after work today:

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Ashon Thadon

lol@felix..thank you..please do and give me some feedback

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linnreights

Now that was different from anything I've read on BookRix.. I think different is good! You have some grammar errors but I'm sure you'll clean it up in time. Keep writing and Welcome to BookRix!

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Ashon Thadon

thank you

Ashon Thadon

appreciate it and I definitely will work more on the grammar aspect..

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Ashon Thadon

i know it's just an intro but i like feedback..please don't hesitate to make comments or suggestion or likes..

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Gelöschter User

I really like this story...The opening is what kept me reading this story. I hope you write more...I like to find stories that don't sound like all the other ones or as predictable. The only thing you should work on is maybe your grammar. Other then that, I would most certainly... mehr anzeigen

Ashon Thadon

thank you very much

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