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Forever A Child

User: ashknight
Forever A Child
When Miley Bailey meets mysterious Alice Knight, a very unique five year old. She seems to find herself in over her head despite Alice's distinct warning.

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AMAZING BOOK!!! I love it and hope you write more. I'll definatly keep reading.

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Oh, very good. I'm not sure if I like the creepy little girl or not... but the story was good! ;) Nice job.

I do, however, have some critiques:

You have made several spelling errors. In the beginning of the book, you spell the word 'know' wrong by spelling it 'no'.

Here's a sentence that has another tiny mistake:

"It seems that every time I turn my back there's eye's on me all the time."

Now, if you broke the word 'there's' down,... mehr anzeigen

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