I like the whole story line but you seriously need to stop skipping 1st this happens and then bamn outta no where they do the "deed". Your book needs details as well and maybe u should think about having Trystan's own pov. it will improve the book tramendlisly and give an insite about him. ...... by the way I am so sorry if I offend u in anyway I didn't mean to.
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