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Eva (completed)

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Eva (completed)
Eva has the chance to realize her dream, to be among the first to research an unexplored moon. But Europa doesn't give its secrets away so easily. And in the end, Eva's fate isn't as she'd imagined it to be.

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sci-fi, Eva, moon, Europa, hope, short story
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♥ davebccanada ♥

I'm sure this one was a winner. It was a delight to read your short sci-fi piece. Of course I have to agree with others, it's a shame to waste such a delightful start and not continue the tale. All the same thank you for sharing.

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RevkenR

It is a very interesting concept, and I just loved the ending.

The beginning could use a little work however. For instance if the Engineers were there for a month building the base, how was it that she was one of the first to set foot on the moon?
You might also explain that the atmosphere on the moon was breathable (was that expected or was that a surprise to the explorers).

Outside of that it was an outstanding story, and... mehr anzeigen

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Anya T. Catmus

This was a short story made for a small contest on Wattpad. I don't think I'll add more to it. Thanks for your suggestions, though, and for taking the time to read. :)

RevkenR

Would be an awesome story to continue if you ever decide to. Let me know if you do update it. :o)

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