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User: mouse34
Wat the hell..!
Flame Snow. 16. 2 Japenese knives. 1 gun. Hair colour brown. Eye colour brown. Goes to Secondary School. Knows all the martial arts. A deadly warrior.
When she was a child she had information implanted into her brain. It gave her powers people could only dream of. When 2 goverment officals come round and tell her of this she doesn't believe it. But when she starts to remember her powers bloom and she becomes the deadliest warrior on earth. What will she decide to do?

Fantasy, Action
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90%of people marry there 7th grade love. since u have read this, u will be told good news 2night. if u don't pass this on nine comments ur worst week starts now this isn't fake. apparently if u copy and paste this on ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of ur life tomorrow. you will either get kissed or asked out in the next 53 minutes someone will say i love u

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Well I have sort of edited it on my ipod which is were i write it first. And now i need to find somewhere with wifi so i can update it again.

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Heather Fledderus (geordiriker)

u need to choose between third or first. if it's gonna be told in first, you can't say "Then flame did this, and she said that' it has to be "Then i did this and said that." it gets confusing to the readers otherwise. other than that it is overall interesting, with a plot that makes me want to see where it goes from there. the smoother you make your rhythm, the easier it is for a reader to read it. you may know exactly what... mehr anzeigen

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