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A Door To My Heart

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A Door To My Heart
It's about poems that have my true emotions inside them.

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handmaiden2012

These poems are touching and soothing. They make you think and appreciate life. I love the cover. Great job!

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Poetwriter2011

Angelica,
Your poetry is very touching. Very well written. You definitely show your feelings through your writing. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your work. :)

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rgabel

You seem to have a knack putting your emotions into words. Everyone has given you good advice. Keep putting your heart into words. That is where all good writing comes from. Robynn

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lazarus67

Anjelica, the sentiments are there, that's for sure. You need to work a bit on the grammar and spelling. Also to place your commas in the right places.
Keep at it...it's worth it.
Laz

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kharkins16

I'm not usually a poem girl, but dang! They're great, love em'. You have a few spelling mistakes and you might need more commas, to create pauses and help get the meaning across. But otherwise good job!

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angelapriest

Edit it a little hear and there and you would have a very good entry. Way to go. I have a daughter only 1 year younger than you well maybe almost 2 years she will 14 this April the 4th. She likes to write poems and draw anime art.

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