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ULTRA-X

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ULTRA-X
Shaun Kane saves a man from armed assailants only to be plunged into world reaching conspiracy where the truth may not set you free and death waits round every corner.

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Conspiracy, action, Thriller, Adventure.
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Ashon Thadon

wow..extremely good beginning..edge of my seat suspense and action...definitely needs to be continued..."something out of x-files"

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J.C. Laird

Obviously, the beginning of a much longer story. Could use a bit of touch-up editing, but the plot is an attention grabber and makes you want to find out more...

ss-The Camera

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mordred

Great tale -good character and intensity.
You do need to check spelling and punctuation. If you're like me, you never ha da good grammar class and it takes a lot to get it clean and ready for a fast and interesting read.
Worth the effort in the long run.

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storyteller4

Would ease the reading with attention to paragraphs, and marked separations for changing pov. Would like to read more let me know when more is available.

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