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Unseen Interludes

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Unseen Interludes
It was only a sound. Just a sound. If she had known what she would find, would she have stopped to investigate? If she had known that a quick moment's pause would set-off a chain of thrilling events, would she still give in to curiosity?

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Lesbian, Voyeur, Sex, Sensual, Vignette
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foreverfemme

Hi there, Dghazaly! Thanks for reading, and please check in every now and then 'cause there's more to come soon.

With much appreciation,
Andrea

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foreverfemme

Thanks for that catch, Ripples. A fresh pair of eyes are a writer's best friend.

...and I'll be sure to leave in the hardcore next time. Thanks so much for the read and feedback!

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Glynis Rankin

I read it and I have to say, I'm really looking forward to see....LOL...what happens next. You have done a good job with this, I'm with Yezall on the embellishments, lets see it girl. I know its there. Got it on lock so let me know when the next installment will be. also on the first page, you got again when she's hiding in the shadows, but I think you meant against.

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foreverfemme

"I prefer less embellishments when describing sex."

Mmm, can we talk? LOL, so do I. ;-) But, I'm not sure how far we can go on this site, so I figured to err on the side of flowery. *laughing*

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it muchly!

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yezall

I prefer less embellishments when describing sex. That's me, others my read it and say WOW! I think if you told a longer tale people would get a chance to know your characters and care about them. You have the gift you just have to hone your skills. You're doin great!

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