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milk and cookies

still writing on it :D Von:
milk and cookies
Milk and Cookies
Childhood friends
A love in hiding
Behind distance
Slowly blooming
As time fades away
From wheat and cow
Going through the oven
And a strong milking hand
Until cookie is dipped into milk
Just perfect...together~

Stichwörter: 
cookies, milk, childhood, love
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Gelöschter User

I found one too.... :3 :D

https://img1.etsystatic.com/007/0/6301584/il_570xN.391051053_bktr.jpg https://img1.etsystatic.com/007/0/6301584/il_570xN.391051053_bktr.jpg
alice haze

yup, u totally nailed it. frewaking cute even though to this day i still cannot drink a milk without feeling a little under the weather... XD

alice haze

I MISS U ALL TOO!!!! but u will have to wait for this year to end before i got all the time in the world again to hang around bookrix all day long...uhhh missing that day so much <3

Gelöschter User

OM! thats too far! :o

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Chris-Jean

A delightful story, Alice. I hope you continue to develop it.

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alice haze

thanks so much. i will try continuing it. hope so :)

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Gelöschter User

done!! sooo...next update ?? @_<

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Gelöschter User

Hahaha don't tell him that I gave him that name. ... he already suck with previous one that I gave him.. :D

alice haze

Omg... Too late. Well guess I'll have to handle the consequences :-D

Gelöschter User

Haha no worries! What Mr. Pumbaa could do ? *thinking about it* OMG :o xD

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MelodyB

Cute story you have here :) looking forward to read more

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alice haze

thanks so much!!! <3
i will update soon today... ^_^

MelodyB

I'm really looking forward to it :D It's such a cute story. I needed to get used to the fact that they are named after food, but it's a really funny idea :)
But I have to say, as cute as it is right now, I'm a little afraid it will turn pretty dark at some point :S But still,... mehr anzeigen

alice haze

hehehe...well, that is yet to see. but i prefer to keep it innonnce as much as i could. :)

MelodyB

That's nice to hear :3

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Jane

It´s a realy sweet idea :) great story und nice cover :)

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alice haze

hi, thanks x2 for the feedback :D
yea, the credits of the cover is not mine but i'll pass it on :)

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Gelöschter User

Omg, this is like the cutest story I've ever read!! XD

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alice haze

hehehe...thanks for appreciating it :)
any feedbacks or suggestion are welcome if u have any XD

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wildgoose

Hi,very artistic and cute cover , like the poem/ synopsis(blurb), good idea of two supporting each other when the parents are so busy; this is a believable scenario. Gets a little confusing when they reach school. you bring in some tension when they lose each other/ mistake for another. This tension is a good idea just needs a little work to make it clearer what is happening and the feelings more explicit. Then the resolution... mehr anzeigen

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alice haze

no no, it didn't end yet. it is still chapter one -their childhood.
anyway, i wanna say thank you so much for the thoughtful feedback. i was undecided a little bit when they arrived at school so thats why its confusing there :) i will try improving more. thanks reading it ^_^

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